This feeling that is
weighing over me
I look over my shoulders
to see if it's the world rotating upon them
but all I see
is that monkey
Glaring with his
red eyes
snarling
gnashing nightmare teeth
that
will
chew
right
in
Heavy
this burden
This burden
I am...
You dont have to be a burden. You are in control of your own life.
ReplyDeleteNice lines, No one can control you till you don't want them to control you.
ReplyDeletethis was a powerful poem. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
ReplyDeleteThank you! It's a teaser for my next poetry book ;)
DeleteThis is so touching, love it!!! I love how raw the emotions are in this poem, so good. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much <3
DeleteSuch a touching poem.. I love it. You are so talented. Thanks for sharing..
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletethis is a great poem and I think a lot of us have felt this way before!
ReplyDeleteLove the depth of this. You had such clarity of thought that I could feel your emotions.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for sharing P.S you're such an amazing writer!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much!
DeleteI love how powerfull and deep this poem is! I can't wait to read more of your work!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm working on it, lol <3
DeleteVery deep, though I'm not sure whether I got it right. Looking forward to more.
ReplyDeleteNice lines. Such a touching poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteYes, we feel burdened in certain areas of our lives but we always reevaluate things and be ok with letting somethings go.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem...very deep.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful poem, sometimes we have to realize that we are the one who's making our lives heavier when it shouldn't be..
ReplyDeleteThat is definitely true in my case, most times. Thanks!
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