dark
You can't see me
look away
This is where I
hide
just me
and my dreams
toss and turn
through
the replay
down here
I'm not okay
I promise
In my deepest
dark
You can't hear me
silence
embracing me like an old
friend
grasping at anything to climb out
eventually
As for now,
I'm down in my deepest
dark
hiding
just me and my dreams.
Sometimes, we run for solace in our 'deepest dark' corners but it eventually becomes overwhelming. Ben there and what helped me most is accepting myself and coming out.
ReplyDeleteWow, this is such a beautiful poem and I love it! Wishing to make a beautiful poem like this someday, good job!
ReplyDeleteThis is soooo beautiful wow!!! Saving it...Thanks a lot for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone <3
ReplyDeleteYou are not alone in those moments. But you alone only can make your climb out of the black tunnel. Hold on to the light and rush forward.
ReplyDelete<3
DeleteLove it😍
ReplyDeleteDon't worry, we are here for you.
ReplyDeleteHonestly, we all are in the same place only.
I really enjoyed this poem. To me I interpreted it as you don't want someone to see your thoughts or emotions as you think about things that you don't want anyone to know (or maybe even overthinking [which I do a lot myself]), but at the same time you do want to be able to get out of your head sometimes... even though it's a struggle.
ReplyDeleteAccurate interpretation <3
DeleteVery deep and touching writing. You use words skillfully to paint beautiful emotional pictures.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
DeleteLoved the poem, your desire to live with your dreams in your own quite solace way.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautifully written poem. You are quite talented in writing poems, not many can do that.
ReplyDeleteThere are a ton of amazing poets out there, but thank you so much!
DeleteWoah, I had to read this a few times just to get all the layers. Thank for being so vulnerable in sharing this!
ReplyDeleteVery deep. It's always good to have someone to share your darkest thoughts with, but one has to come out of it on one's own
ReplyDeleteThis poem was dare I say it "deep". I been here before this was relatable!
ReplyDeleteI love this poem. It speaks through the heart and soul. Indeed in poem, one can express their inner thoughts and feelings.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!
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