Monday, June 29, 2020

The Hollow

In the

hollow

of your elbow

I bend
to
your will

In the

hollow

of the valley

I follow
the
wind to the

hollow

of your cheek
and lay
silently so I may catch every

hollow

word
that spills from your lips.

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15 comments:

  1. UnknownJune 29, 2020 at 11:08 PM

    This is so beautifully written. You have so much talent.

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  2. Maxim DsouzaJune 30, 2020 at 3:14 AM

    Very nicely written. Precise and deep. Thanks for sharing.

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  3. Rose Ann SalesJune 30, 2020 at 6:00 AM

    Great poem..! I enjoyed reading it so much.

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  4. Why Girls Are WeirdJune 30, 2020 at 6:35 AM

    Oh my goodness I love this. I actually read it twice. You wrote this so beautifully, thank you for sharing this.

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  5. AnonymousJune 30, 2020 at 7:34 AM

    I love this poem! You are very talented! Keep up the good work!

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  6. Marie at Complete LiteratureJune 30, 2020 at 9:38 AM

    You have a talent for poetry! I have never been very good at it. This was beautiful.

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  7. Lyosha VarezhkinaJune 30, 2020 at 12:53 PM

    beautiful poem. very delicate and definitely talented.

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  8. Stephanie StebbinsJune 30, 2020 at 12:59 PM

    Thanks so much, everyone <3

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  9. Kathy BalmoresJune 30, 2020 at 2:59 PM

    Heartbreaking. That last stanza got to me.

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  10. Kathleen CreggJuly 1, 2020 at 12:08 AM

    This is so beautiful! Hollow is such a powerful word.

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  11. solrazo.comJuly 1, 2020 at 7:32 AM

    So touching, you are really talented and good in poetry.

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  12. tweenselmomJuly 1, 2020 at 9:58 AM

    This is a really nice poem! Glad you shared this with us, thank you!

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  13. JhangiJuly 1, 2020 at 12:10 PM

    OmG it is so deep and heart touching indeed..really loved it..you have really written it so perfectly and amazingly..Thanks for sharing...

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  14. Sushmita MalakarJuly 1, 2020 at 11:45 PM

    Very beautifully written! Really touching :)

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